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Jenny - Heroine of Lightness by theheroofdarkness Jenny - Heroine of Lightness by theheroofdarkness
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"Her title as being the Heroine of Lightness was secretly put on by Master Cockerell who instructed her on stopping Aramuil – a former apprentice of said Master who made it his live goal to bring his pretended “grandfather” Demon, the Nexus of Xehanort back from his eternal punishment of ice.

However, though she did the best she could – Jenny was still unable to stop the insane Assassin as he was able to unlock Demon’s prison and with that, starting their rampage once again on the worlds.

However due to her fears, she is seemly cold at the outside as much as brave and gentle on the inside. Trough her journey to find her lost comrades, Jenny is able to defrost herself and yet, again gaining hope of defeating the Nexus of Xehanort once and for all…"





Alright, now to 3 of 4 - Jenny, the Heroine of Lightness.

I must say that this pic is one of my personal faves - I am even thinking if I should make the background available for free use... but well, let's see - maybe if she wins? Who knows...

Anyway, yes in that case I made her more KH look alike and give more details into her clothing than what the old look which was less realistic, 'though there weren't that much changes about the colors. I also changed the necklace a little bit, but well...

So, even the eyes worked completely - I think the only difficult part on this whole thing was designing the shoes to give them a KH feeling as well...

At least I wanted to let this thing look like a KH-Artwork or Nomura's style - if I really made it or not is what you got to decide.

Well... all the informations considering the Nexuses and their true origin can be found here: [link] (at least until I write a closer explanation on the whole thing)
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:iconcarolinadm13:
I looks really nice, the key and the clothes look really good although there are some little details to have in mind, as you can see in the front view her left ( which looks like her right arm from here) has been bent to the wrong side making it look a little weird, the hair looks amazing but keep in mind to not make it too big or it will look like she has an out of normal sized head, except from that I love the whole drawing, very creative, would love to see more works from you, A very unique idea.
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This looks very good, the details are perfectly made! it looks also very colorfull many blue colors everywhere and it looks great with the coloring! the shade that is one of the important thing is very good i love the way you shade and where you did it! you have shown that it actually matters of where you shade to make the drawing real! i love this drawing. But the arm is too short and has to be a bit more longer! and if that would be fixed im 100% sure this would look perfect. But again the drawing is fantastic and you did a really great job!
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llirbwerdnadivad Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
The link in the description doesn't work...would you mind giving a quick overview of what a Nexus is in a reply?
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
that's 'cause I deleted that "old" artwork meanwhile - 'though I guess I can explain ya in a note later...
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animefreaksakurakun Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
shes prety cool, Im to tired to write a critique soo maybe tomorrow
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm glad that you see things this way... the same goes for Demon :D
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xXShadow-FlameXx Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice character! ~<3
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks ^^
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xXShadow-FlameXx Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem! C:
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Gamerdragon1992 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Student
Fantastic
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y2jenn Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012   General Artist
She's fun! You did a good job with her outfit so that she fits into that world well. Her shoes are wild! :D
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
why thank you for that compliment :D although I'd redesigning her a little bit at the moment :-)

I never had the chance in speaking with someone from the actual DA staff before, so in that case, I'm even double honored for your kind words. :D
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Melanthriel Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
Those clothes are PERFECT for KH.
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
why thank you... that really moved me :iconiloveyouplz:
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Melanthriel Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011
You're so so welcome! :love:
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Melanthriel Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
THAT. DESIGN.
HER CLOTHES.
THEY'RE SO AWESOME. O____O dude.teachme.
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
If I would have time to give lessons... but perhaps soon enough
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Melanthriel Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011
Okay! OuO
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nicjomo Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
cool! she looks kick ass!
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Student Digital Artist
why thank you... :D
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NathalieWinter Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
Though the concept and story of this fan written story are quite interesting, and rather unique to the KH fandom (and trust, me, I HARDLY say that at ALL to anyone), I find this character's design to need some anatomy work. Nothing to big, but the left arm, and the size/shape of the head needs a more circle like shape in the front view. As well as the back view, as you gave her too much of a bump. If you downed it a bit more, it would have had better look to it. The left arm should be more smoother, and in my personal opinion it should have been bent the opposite way to give it a more smoother look. The design of her clothing, however, is very good; simple but with small details that make it stand out. The shoes are well done, too, though the back view needs a bit of work. There are some spelling errors, too.

All in all it's pretty well done, and a good fan character. ( Trust me, I don't say THAT to many people. Nearly none, really, so this is both a compliment, and a critique. )

I also felt obligated to comment as she coincidentally shares my name.
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Student Digital Artist
wow... that was... quite impressive what you wrote here. I'd have never believed that someone would actually really make such a compliment about my idea being "unique" - I must say that it really surprised me as much as shocked me (in a positive light of course)

Well, I admit that I'm not 100% happy with the whole thing myself either, but on the other side, from all what I've done so far, this work, together with the other three are the first ones to accentuate themselves from others, that's why I wasn't even that much upset about the anatomy not working correctly as wanted (at least her 2nd pose is where I know that I'm like "nay" rather than yay)

I'm also glad that you actually pointed out as much praise as critique and that's what makes out a good critic in my point of view to return the compliment.

It may not be 100% perfect, but on the other side who's perfect in this world anyway? This just motivates me to practice even more.

So, thank you very much for giving me feedback :-)
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NathalieWinter Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011
You're very welcome. Practice makes perfect, and I'm sure you'll nail it if you keep trying.
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
that's true... :-)
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roxasora225 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
Nice work she looks great!! :)
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Student Digital Artist
why thank you... :D
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Ryu890 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Hmm...interesting. Although I have a natural inclination to dislike fanfictions that involve the 'main' characters, I admit, this one has me curious.



This is a compliment, btw. I'm stating that you've managed to peak my interest in a genre that I usually simply disregard.
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I can surely understand why - and it's also what I think once I see all the old same OCs in somewhat nearly identical things - at least for KHIII there were many people who created something new from nothing without a backup and that's getting boring by time.

At least, I tried to make some sense into it than rather putting out something stupidly out of the sleeves.

And thank you for the compliment, it really means something to me...
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Ryu890 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
Your words confuse me.

Are you complimenting Kingdom Hearts 3? A game that has yet to be released? :/

*shrugs* Same here. Personally, I prefer using the same in-universe rules, but with a completely new cast of characters. Usually anyways. (I admit to one roleplay wherein I played Kairi's son, the one and only 'Prince of Heart' but even then, Sora was dead, and Kairi only showed up to make sure Aaron and his friend escaped.) Atleast I didn't attempt to make it pure Yaoi fanservice, with some actual writing character development planned. Sure it didn't get far but....


:) Not a problem.
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Student Digital Artist
well... I merely took a reference to the fact how people come up with another enemy race each time, like the "The Forgotten" or soul based enemies and with that also new parts created for Sora.
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Ryu890 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
Hmm....

Yeah. Having a new race of generic monsters for the sake of having new generic monsters DOES seem kind of pointless....

Although I see the reasoning behind the Unversed. At that point, niather Heartless or Nobidies existed.
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Student Digital Artist
yeah, same goes for Nexuses - at least they're built up on something that already exists - in that case the Heartless and the hearts that they captured...

but you're mistaken at one point - the Heartless already existed back there alongside with the Unversed, only that the Heartless where imprisoned away in that time, until Terranort broke the lock that hold them back to explain things this way...
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Ryu890 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
*nods* About when in the 'timeline' would this have occurred?

*chuckles* Terranort. Not a term I've heard to be honest. It sounds like a couple-name. Nonetheless, my point was, the Heartless couldn't have been used for your generic 'mook' villains that you slay regularly.
Ni. This is making me crave roleplay. As such stories usually do to me. Hmmm......
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Student Digital Artist
good question... I think on that, I'd say... Demon was born at the same time as Xehanort turned into Heartless and Nobody, but he acted much later than his other incarnations... about Jenny - well, I can't tell on it that much as her past before Sora is pretty much important for later, that's why I'll leave this one unanswered.

the Final Chapter about this whole story (Kingdom Hearts Connected - the story where Jenny will finally oppose, and hopefully dispose, Demon once and for all) plays around the same time as Dream Drop Distance (either that or coded, but definitely after KHII; haven't thought that much closely on that)
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Irishbrewinc Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Your drawing girls is definitly improving (by quite the margin), but I can't help but notice that the left Jenny's Left Arm (from her perception) is bending the wrong way, but it's great nothingless.
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student Digital Artist
well... what a luck she got so much hair to cover that one... :XD: - well, surely there will even more improvement show up once I started at college... drawing humans there and study anatomy will be one of the many things to learn there - at least unlike old school, I look forward to it... :-)
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Darth-Drago Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
Nice work man. So how you been?
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student Digital Artist
busy - and pretty much hung up - originally, I really wanted to be more active around here, but real live with lots of homework and 3 weeks working out on the redesigns of all of the characters sure took away pretty much time... at least i hope that now I might be able to do much more before college starts...

and how have you been doing so far? I think you already are/were at college as I can recall so far...
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Darth-Drago Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Yeah am still at college. Most people were about college being hard,but i have special help from college since i have "special" condition. For the rest of my days, it ok. I have also been creative alot of ideas, but for some reason i haven't made sending stories for awhile; maybe because i couldn't think of an ending yet, or maybe that am trying to make my story a bit more interesting for viewrs, don't know. But now am over it.
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student Digital Artist
i see... well, at least you're alright on what you're doing and that's what's important after all :-)
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Darth-Drago Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Thanks.
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theheroofdarkness Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Student Digital Artist
you're welcome...
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